Good grief! I just realized that I hadn't already commented on this. That I just left this window open so I could re-read this ... several times. So now I'm a little late, but I actually read it right after Julie commented.

Holy cow this is great! And fun. And sweet. And hot. And everything that they are all rolled up into one wonderful little package. You are so good!

She didn't see Tony slip around behind her, but she did feel when he put his arm under hers to lean on the pinball machine.

Guh. Just. [breathes in] The whole piece is vivid, but this starts the "extra so" part. I can see this. I can see every little detail. [pauses a moment to focus on the image] Yeah. Guh.

Nice, nice, nice. Please feel free to holler if you ever need a beta.