ext_391411: May I witness the honeymoon? (MPREG)
campylobacter ([identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] holdouttrout 2011-02-18 06:37 pm (UTC)

Re: Jack/Daniel/Vala, Snowbound, PG-13

“Men are warmer.”
I love this line. I love that the subject in plural refers to 2 very specific, warm men.

“No fondling the general. That’s my job.”
Territorial!Daniel is ADORABLE.

Daniel was feeling her hands. “Hey, you really are cold!”
OMG, Solicitous!Daniel is SEXY.

As he kissed her, Jack felt for Daniel’s hand and twined their fingers together.
You manage in 14 words what I could never accomplish in 14,000: the awesomeness of Jack/Daniel/Vala.

[surfed in from http://community.livejournal.com/stargate_search/444979.html]

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