ext_1500 ([identity profile] whimsicalwhims.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] holdouttrout 2008-01-01 05:43 am (UTC)

Re: Jack/Daniel/Vala, Snowbound, PG-13

Ooh. Methinks that this trio has some interesting times ahead.

I really liked how you described this bit:
The bed shifted as Daniel reached out to pull him closer and Vala gave a pleased murmur as she offered him her lips. As he kissed her, Jack felt for Daniel’s hand and twined their fingers together.

Lovely.
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