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Over at her journal, [personal profile] oxoniensis is running the hugs, cuddles, and kisses multifandom challenge. And because I had a sucky Easter, I decided to write me some. I've been assured that despite my brain being fuzzy and not functioning properly, this ficlet does not, in fact, suck. Hopefully my friend isn't just lying to make me feel better.

:-)


You can find my contribution here in the challenge, or you can click the lj cut below.

What Happens on PX4-485..., SG1, Sam/Jack, Break the regs

*_*_*_*_*

PX4-485 was the kind of planet that was completely useless to them in their fight against the Goa'uld, and the kind of planet that would have an immeasurably high value once the war was over and the Stargate program went public.

Perfect miles of beaches in either direction, with white sand and crystal blue waters

"I can just see it," Jack said. "People get their hands on this place, it's filled with condos before the year is out."

Sam said, "So why don't we just keep it quiet?"

Jack gave his 2IC a look. "Are you suggesting we falsify the report, major?"

Sam gave him an innocent look. "Of course not. We don't lie...we just simply leave out the adjectives. Might keep the vultures away a little longer."

Jack studied Sam for a moment and then smiled. "Devious, Carter. Very sneaky."

Sam returned the grin. "Thank you, sir." They held the grin for a little bit too long, and then looked away quickly.

They had split up earlier that day, with Daniel and Teal'c walking north along the shore and Sam and Jack walking south. Now they were on the way back, having confirmed that there was, so far as any of them could tell, absolutely nothing militarily interesting about the place.

Jack nodded at the cove ahead. "That's where we started from."

Sam grabbed her radio. "Daniel, Teal'c. We're almost there. You about back?"

A pause, and then Daniel spoke. "Actually, I think we're about an hour away still. I um...might have fallen down into a ravine. It took us a while to find a way back up."

Jack rolled his eyes. Sam spoke into the radio. "Understood. We'll wait for you here."

"Alright," Daniel replied distractedly.

Sam and Jack continued to the outlook of rock that marked their beginning position and a straight shot to the 'gate. They climbed up the cliffs surrounding the beach until they were on top, where the native grasses began immediately, offering a pleasant placed to sit and watch the gentle waves lap the shore.

Sam sighed.

Jack turned to her, a smile already on his face. She smiled back. Again, they held eye contact just a fraction too long, but instead of lapsing into awkward silence, Jack said, casually, "You know, I've been thinking about your suggestion--falsifying the reports."

Sam looked at him curiously. "Sir?"

"Well, we keep this planet under wraps...it would make a great retirement spot."

Sam smiled. "It would, sir."

Jack leaned back on his elbows, and Sam mimicked his position. They'd taken off their jackets earlier, so their bare arms brushed each other near their shoulders.

Jack cleared his throat just as Sam turned her head to say something. It left their faces just inches apart.

Jack said, "An hour?"

Sam nodded. "We're already falsifying our report."

Jack leaned in a fraction of an inch. “A good point.”

Sam licked her lips. Jack's eyes went straight to them, and Sam swallowed reflexively. Jack's eyes flicked back to hers, and she hesitated one more moment, then leaned in suddenly, closing the remaining distance between them. Their lips touched, their skin warmed by the all-day contact with the sun.

Jack reached an arm around her head, pulled her closer, and she shifted so she was on one hip, her right leg crossed over her left and against his right side. Jack muttered something into her mouth she didn't catch, but tugged at her gently so that she moved until she was practically on top of him, leaning over him as he supported them both with his hands planted behind him.

They kissed under the sun for some time, until Sam pulled away. Jack's head dropped back, and Sam sighed. Jack bent his elbows and dropped back to the ground, keeping his eyes closed. Sam moved to the side and dropped down beside him.

Jack rolled onto his side and looked at her. “I think we ought to make a rule: what happens on PX4-485 stays on PX4-485.”

Sam smiled, only the smallest hint of regret in her eyes, and kissed Jack's chin. “Sounds like a plan.”

By the time Daniel and Teal'c arrived, they were arguing about whether or not it was possible for a planet to have perpetually good weather, having moved on from the perfect location to build a house.

Date: 2007-04-09 09:51 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] surreallis.livejournal.com
ext_962: (sam-jack touch)
Awww! I love fic where Sam and Jack are on a mission and impromptu kissage occurs! This was wonderful to read right before I have to go to work today. :)

Date: 2007-04-09 11:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] katcorvi.livejournal.com
As [livejournal.com profile] surrealphantast said, this was a great way to start my morning before heading into work. Very nice little ficlet of our devious heroes.

P.S. I'm glad that Daniel wasn't seriously hurt from his fall, just delayed.

Date: 2007-04-09 12:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] dknightshade.livejournal.com
Cute! Very nice tension build up just before the kiss. :-)

Date: 2007-04-09 12:24 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] rigel-7.livejournal.com
ext_1836: (jack/sam)
*squeebles* And this is a lovely way for me to end the day :D

Date: 2007-04-09 01:41 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] karma-aster.livejournal.com
Awww...this is charming!

Date: 2007-04-09 05:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (Default)
Kissing is, of course, the main reason to go to work in the first place. Especially if you're Sam or Jack. You never know when alien influence is just around the corner.

:-)

Date: 2007-04-09 05:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (grace_kiss)
Daniel's too easy to injure. I really didn't want to make him get into trouble again--it's a very nasty Sam/Jack fic-writer's tendency to abuse the poor man just to get him out of the way. :-)

Thanks for reading, and your icon has it right on the money.

Date: 2007-04-09 05:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (Default)
Oh, good. I was worried there wasn't enough tension. Thanks for reading!

Date: 2007-04-09 05:35 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (Default)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

Date: 2007-04-09 05:35 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (Default)
*looks at icon*

They so are.

And thank you!

Date: 2007-04-10 01:53 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] pepper-field.livejournal.com
ext_3314: Woman writing (Mwah mwah)
*cuddles* Very sweet - and ah, white sandy beaches, crystal blue water... *wistful sigh* I love the idea that planets like this will suddenly become a valuable resource once the Stargate programme goes public - so true! *g*

Just what my tired brain wanted.

Date: 2007-04-10 07:07 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (Default)
I know other people have mentioned the idea of prime real estate--just a 'gate hop away! So it's not my original idea...

It just seems very true. But can you imagine billions of Tau'ri on vacation?

*shudders*

:-)

Date: 2007-04-11 06:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
ext_19622: (Sam and Jack - hug (heroes))
OMG, wow! That was my prompt! =P

And awwww! It was soooo damn cute! I love it! *grins*

Yup. Of the non-shippy moments, this has gotta be my fav:

Sam grabbed her radio. "Daniel, Teal'c. We're almost there. You about back?"

A pause, and then Daniel spoke. "Actually, I think we're about an hour away still. I um...might have fallen down into a ravine. It took us a while to find a way back up."


Hehe, gotta love Daniel there! I can totally hear his voice when he says that, if that makes sense. =)

Date: 2007-04-11 07:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com
ext_2131: picture of a fish with lots of green (Default)
Oh, yay! I've never done something with an anonymous prompt before...so it was really exciting that I just *happened* to get yours.

I really love Daniel. I know, as a Sam/Jack shipper, I'm not supposed to...but I fell in love with Daniel, first. He always sounds just the slightest bit distracted whenever he says anything, and it's really endearing (though I can see how it would be frustrating).

I have two takes on the Sam/Jack relationship: one is that it's angst with little bits of fluff, and one is that it's fluff with tiny little bits of angst sprinkled in. I know which one I like better. But I'm a sap like that.

Date: 2007-04-17 10:07 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
ext_19622: (Daniel and Janet)
Oh yes. It was very exciting! *nods furiously*

I really love Daniel. I know, as a Sam/Jack shipper, I'm not supposed to...but I fell in love with Daniel, first.

Hey! I really like Daniel! And I'm a Sam/Jack shipper! I guess I did fall for Sam and Jack first though...

He always sounds just the slightest bit distracted whenever he says anything, and it's really endearing (though I can see how it would be frustrating).

Exactly my thoughts...except probably more in depth and coherent... He's just too adorable with all that! =P

I have two takes on the Sam/Jack relationship: one is that it's angst with little bits of fluff, and one is that it's fluff with tiny little bits of angst sprinkled in. I know which one I like better. But I'm a sap like that.

Again, exactly my thoughts! Much better worded though! =P

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