The key to writing first person pov sex is to describe almost none of the action. Lots of "I feel" and "she's just so darn hot with the light filtering in from the window" and "I can't even breathe" type of commentary, and dialogue, and absolutely none of the tab A slot B type of stuff.
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Date: 2007-12-31 09:34 pm (UTC)From:*whistles with great nonchalance*